Job Offer Letter? Will this one be okay ? Help !!!

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Hi i just wrote a job offer letter myself for my husband's visa
Read and tell me will this be okay
Any grammar mistakes please tell me
So i can ask the company to write him a letter
Any suggestion where i can amend anything please?

A.B.C Ltd (company name on the header)
company address goes here and phone no

To British High Commission
Re Mr A.B.C D.o.b: 99/99/99 of Address :No 1 Two road Newtown

We are offering the above named person a job offer as a production staff on his return to uk in our shop trading as A SHOP 1 Two Lane Street Newtown. His hours of work will be 40 hours and pay rate will be £5.52/hr. If you have any concern Please contact me on the number above

Yours Sincerely

A MAN
Director

[resol07]

1. You are "offering a job offer". !??
2. Contact at the number above, not on the number. You can jump on a roof but can't contact on a number, only at a number.

[resol07]

There are actually a number of other grammatical mistakes that I'm just not bothered to point out (articles etc.).

However, you should be aware that writing your own job offer letter, especially when done in an amateur way (and for a bare minimum wage) might expose you to suspicions of fraud.

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I am not doing anything illegal
I spoke to one of my friend he is willing to offer my husband a job but he doesnt know what to write in a letter thats why i ask the board if they think this will be suffice

[sajidmahmood]

This is to confirm that we have offered a job to Mr. Great Khali after careful consideration of his application which was given to us by a member of his family.

We will employ Mr. Great Khali as soon as he is available for work. We will pay the applicant £5.52 per hour for a minimum of 8 hours a day for the first 4 weeks. We will increase his wages depending on his commitment and attitude to work after the first 4 weeks.

If you have any further queries then please do not hesitate to contact us.


Yours Sincerely,

Hornswoggle

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thanks sajidmahmood it was quite good
thankyou again