sponsor letter advice needed please help

[azzik]

Hi I have wrote a sponsor letter to sponsor my grandma for indefinate stay in th UK she is 83 years old. Can anone please spare 5 mins to read it and see if it sounds ok or have I wrote something that my create problems or give home office a reason for rejection. I did approach a few qualified people but they want me to pay £500 which I cannot afford to pay since the application is already costing me £750. Is there anyone proffessional that can spare 5 mins to review my letter. I can email it if you provide email address.
Thanks you for your help in advance.

[Wanderer]

Hi I have wrote a sponsor letter to sponsor my grandma for indefinate stay in th UK she is 83 years old. Can anone please spare 5 mins to read it and see if it sounds ok or have I wrote something that my create problems or give home office a reason for rejection. I did approach a few qualified people but they want me to pay £500 which I cannot afford to pay since the application is already costing me £750. Is there anyone proffessional that can spare 5 mins to review my letter. I can email it if you provide email address.
Thanks you for your help in advance.

What are you applying for that costs 750?

[azzik]

indefinate leave to remain in the UK for a dependant or grandparents (Forms SET F)
The home office fee is £750 for the application.
http://www.bia.homeoffice.gov.uk/siteco ... ent/set(f)