Hello All,
I was confident that my reference letter content was fine, but now after reading about so many rejections due to graduated level job not verified, I would like to ask you for feedback on my letter.
The concerning parts are the job position, graduated job explicit and job description. The other information, salary, company letterhead papel, period, etc, I believe are fine. Besides, I started on this company after I graduated as BS in Computer Science, which is equivalent to a UK BS degree. Moreover, I'll also provide corporate contract (I worked through my own company opened for employment purposes) and tax income return to support the work experience letter.
I wrote the following:
"...
His job as a System Analyst and Programmer, which is a graduated level job, carried mainly the following duties and responsibilities:
• Investigating and analyzing in detail business problems and requirements related to the implementation of computer systems, known as Decision Support systems or Business Intelligence (BI) systems, in our clients, which are usually major companies such as banks, insurance companies and retailers;
• Specifying the design of the Business Intelligence system that meets the business requirements and solve the problems;
• Specifying the design (modeling) as well as programming the Business Intelligence system databases that provide data to third-party Business Intelligence software resold by our company;
• Specifying the design as well as programming data extraction from existing databases, data transformation and resulting data loading into the Business Intelligence system databases;
• Specifying the design as well as programming additional software features, not covered by the third-party Business Intelligence software resold, in order to deliver a complete Business Intelligence system that fully meets all business requirements;
• Planning and working on a completion deadline of the Business Intelligence system implementation in our clients.
"
My concerns now are:
1) Is it a problem to use "System Analyst and Programmer" as they match with two diferent postions in the guidance, although I'm detailing the responsabilidades according to both positions? Shall I use "System Analyst and Sytem Programmer" as there is also only "Programmer" in the guidance, which might confuse the caseworker?
2) Are the responsabilities so much detailed, long and exaustive? I tried to explain as better as I can for a layperson in IT, matching it with the guidance. Besides, the software resold is explicitly written as in the corporate contract is detailed that the company resells some softwares, so I though it was better to write it like that, which in fact was exactly the way I used to work.
3) Is it fine to mention only "which is a graduated level job" or shall I give more details, such as: "A BS degree in Computer Sciences is required to fullfill his duties and responsabilites"?
Thanks a lot for the pacience in reading that! I really appreciate any feedback as I am quite unconfident and going crazy with all those details in the letter
Best regards,
Vinicius
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